Yay ;u; I'm REALLY superduperamazinglylikeomfgsosososossoso proud of this one.
[link] This was inspired by this song, but I've never seen the anime. It's really sad though ;u;
And yes, I asked for this to be critiqued. And what I mean by that is PLEASE bother to critique my work, not only this piece, but some others, too. It'd be appreciated so much. :/
Okay. Amazing, like always. First of all, I want to say that overall, the mood is set very well by the darkness in the background, and the almost static design on the fur of the cats. If you wanted to work on something, I would suggest that you made the gray cat sitting next to Silverstream (Cinderpelt, I believe?) crying's forehead is a little too broad for it to be realistic. If you wanted it to be realistic and not anime, I mean. - Also, perhaps you could not make Crookedstar's front left paw less exaggerated near the top? If he's that muscled, it's fine, though. The whole thing is really accurate anatomy-wise and captures the emotion perfectly. c: Incredible job, bro.
First of all, I want to say that overall, the mood is set very well by the darkness in the background, and the almost static design on the fur of the cats.
If you wanted to work on something, I would suggest that you made the gray cat sitting next to Silverstream (Cinderpelt, I believe?) crying's forehead is a little too broad for it to be realistic. If you wanted it to be realistic and not anime, I mean. -
Also, perhaps you could not make Crookedstar's front left paw less exaggerated near the top? If he's that muscled, it's fine, though.
The whole thing is really accurate anatomy-wise and captures the emotion perfectly. c:
Incredible job, bro.
~Owler
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